tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5403017110948354453.post1609294170051107235..comments2024-03-14T18:28:33.536+08:00Comments on Writing by Amir: PAS with flying coloursAmir Muhammadhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08144421497045270238noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5403017110948354453.post-80155959885242723692008-08-17T17:23:00.000+08:002008-08-17T17:23:00.000+08:00re: "One of our top public intellectuals, Farish A...re: "One of our top public intellectuals, Farish A. Noor is not a PAS member but a nattily-dressed secular democrat. The fact that he can ‘see’ Malaysian history through the eyes of this party just proves how rarely the rest of us dare to venture outside our own comfort zones."<BR/><BR/>The absence of a good editor is like the departure of a loving wife. <BR/><BR/>The fact that a secularist can write so comprehensively about an islamic party "proves" what? I have to wobble the sentence around a lot to wrap my brain around it.<BR/><BR/>How about: The fact that a secularist can write so comprehensively about an islamic party throws into stark relief how rarely the rest of us dare to venture outside our own comfort zones.<BR/><BR/>Cliches that still need fixing:<BR/>"stark relief"<BR/>"dare to venture"<BR/>"outside comfort zones"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5403017110948354453.post-76230500935444499482008-08-17T17:09:00.000+08:002008-08-17T17:09:00.000+08:00re: "One of our top public intellectuals, Farish A...re: "One of our top public intellectuals, Farish A. Noor is not a PAS member but a nattily-dressed secular democrat. The fact that he can ‘see’ Malaysian history through the eyes of this party just proves how rarely the rest of us dare to venture outside our own comfort zones."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5403017110948354453.post-348155259932615202008-07-31T21:03:00.000+08:002008-07-31T21:03:00.000+08:00Yes zaa!!Cantik this writting dan in common parts ...Yes zaa!!<BR/><BR/>Cantik this writting dan in common parts macam boleh bersetuju.. Apa kata Amir banyak memberikan kupasan pasal pasal kepartian Pas plak.. Mungkin kupasan dari sudut intelektual dan perkembangan dunia sejagat.. keh keh keh.. Saya amat suka apabila Amir menulis.. hehe ;)Oleh admin Bebas Malaysiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00176158326778254763noreply@blogger.com